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First 26 pages of Neal Stephenson's new novel Seveneves
- ceequof 12y agoIt seems like my first knee-jerk impression of every Stephenson novel of the last decade has been "ugh, terrible", gradually replaced by a retrospective fondness after finishing it. The first couple pages of Seveneves certainly does not impress, but maybe I'll like it better after reading the whole thing.
- MagicWishMonkey 12y agoAnathem was kind of a slog for the first 200-250 pages, but then it started to get good, and then awesome, by the end of the book my mind was thoroughly blown.
- jdludlow 12y agoThe first time I read Anathem it was certainly slow to get through the first 200 pages, because I kept referencing the glossary to learn the vocabulary. The 2nd and 3rd times I read it the entire book flowed much more smoothly, and even the beginning was quite enjoyable.
- itp 12y agoI didn't find the beginning quite a slog but I did wonder if there was going to be a "plot" in the conventional sense. As you say, the rest of the book was a near-continuous crescendo. One scene in particular (Saunt Bucker's Basket!) made me literally stop reading while my brain processed. My wife read my copy after me. If I remember correctly, she more or less read up to that scene in 5-10 page increments, and then read from that scene to the end in most of one night.
- pavel_lishin 12y ago> Saunt Bucker's Basket! That was, bar none, the best reading experience in my life.
- abrown28 12y agowhat chapter is that in?
- eob 12y agoI think I started, and then shelved, Anathem three times before finally powering through the first third of the book and like you was hooked once I did.
- imglorp 12y agoVonnegut spoke at my convocation. His advice for fiction writers was to write your whole work and then throw away the first chapter, thus dumping your reader into the action. He despised setup.
- bkcooper 12y agoI had the opposite trajectory. I loved the early worldbuilding but didn't really care for the magical powers invoked at the end.
- mdturnerphys 12y agoGlad I'm not the only one.
- ghaff 12y agoI don't write fiction but when I write longer-form articles, whitepapers, and so forth I find that a good percentage of the time I end up going back and chopping out a good bit of what a former boss described as "throat clearing" at the beginning. Not always; sometimes by chance I hit on a good metaphor or story or some other lead-in that works. But at least as often it's way too much digression and backstory and setup in advance of getting to the actual topic at hand. With respect to Anathem in particular a lot of the problem is you didn't really understand what was going on for quite a while and I found that made it a bit of an effort to keep going.
- MagicWishMonkey 12y agoThat was part of the payoff, though. You're confused at first, wondering wtf is up with the vocabularly people are using, it all starts to make sense about 3/4 of the way through the book. Damn, I need to read that one again. It's been too long.
- unoti 12y agoAnd when you read it again, you might find that it's still too long! I kid, I kid. I ended up loving Anathem too, although I seriously struggled to get going.
- IndianAstronaut 12y agoThe new vocabulary was tough. It was a difficult thing to keep a track of through the whole book.
- sgarrity 12y agoI had the exact same experience with Anathem. I remember around the 200-page point thinking, "ok, now we're getting started."
- monochromatic 12y agoI gave up within the first couple hundred pages. Just wasn't enjoying it.
- motdiem 12y agoI had the same experience, anathem took me 4 tries, but eventually I got through the first 200 pages and then thoroughly enjoyed it.
- bkcooper 12y agoThe first couple pages of Seveneves certainly does not impress Man, no kidding. It feels like a very inelegant info dump. While I realize those tend to show up in Stephenson books at some point or another, it's a rough way to start. I liked a lot about Anathem but found Reamde unmemorable. I'd love to see a return to form.
- mpdehaan2 12y agoYep, exactly. Stephenson has a crazy lot of potential - Diamond Age hit pretty well for me, Anthem hit, but some of his other stuff are simply not for me. Readme was a straight forward action story in the middle and I just gave up. He seems to have very very different writing modes.
- phkahler 12y agoDiamond age was a disaster for me. I found the beginning and middle very good and looked forward to more development of a few things. And then it turned into something completely different and weird. I'd rather see the last pages of his new book just to verify he figured out how to write an ending.
- tormeh 12y agoDiamond Age is one of my favourite books. Alongside Cryptonomicon, American Gods and Rainbows End. Reamde was a dud for me as well.
- JoachimS 12y agoAnathem is one of the best reads in years. But Quicksilver and other book in the baroque cycle is impossible to get through.
- CWuestefeld 12y agoAgreed. For me, it seems that on a page by page basis, the writing was phenomenal - he can verbally paint a picture in a way that no one else can. But the whole Baroque Cycle seemed to lack any actual plot, as far as I could tell. I mean, stuff happened, but it wasn't stuff in the course of resolving some central tension to the story, so you had no idea what direction you were traveling in. And I just couldn't go another thousand or two pages aimlessly.
- atmosx 12y agoThat's absolutely true. I remember the first 100 pages of 'Cryptonomicon'. I was just trying to make sense of that blabber I wasn't used to. Since English is not my mother-tongue, I had to use the Kindle to search through the dictionary all too often, otherwise it was impossible to follow. After a 250 pages, I was familiar with most words, even saw some patterns emerging. The novel became increasingly more and more interesting as the pages flew by.
- justinkramp 12y agoI recently started re-reading 'Cryptonomicon' and just finished the first 100 pages. There's an awful lot of setup and flipping between characters but right around this point the stories stop weaving about and begin to demonstrate a determined path. Without those first 100 pages you'd lose a lot of backstory that ends up being pretty interesting as you learn the characters, but I agree it is difficult to follow.
- toby 12y agoThat's interesting... my reaction to "Snow Crash", "Diamond Age" and "Cryptonomicon" was that the premise set up was interesting but the ending always descended into a lame Hollywood action sequence. I'm sure I'm not the only one?
- bryanlarsen 12y agoWarning: publishing date is May 19th so you'll be left hanging for a month if it sucks you in.
- elevensies 12y agoThat reminds me, I really hate how they start promoting books a few weeks before they are released. I see the promotion, and then when I go to buy it "pre-order" ??!?! Like it isn't a fucking yacht, I give you the money you give me the book, I'm not interested in a more complicated transaction. I'd be happier if they did the promotion during a time frame where I could actually buy it.
- cstross 12y agoBusiness reality, alas. The book biz isn't as bad as movies, which are made or broken by their first 48 hours of box office receipts, but 80% of sales still occur within 3 months of publication (in hardcover, with a similar bounce when the book goes paperback). First-week sales are what count for (a) bestseller list presence and (b) bookstore re-orders based on (a). And pre-orders count towards first-week sales!
- TylerE 12y agoYou can buy the ebook. It'll just magically appear on my Kindle on release day.
- myth_buster 12y agoSame as pre-order I suppose. I suppose his complaint was that don't build the hype unless we can get hold of it. It's like Nolan's movie teasers which end with "Summer, ++Now.Year()".
- elevensies 12y agoYeah, I probably average 1000 pages per month on Kindle for iPhone. My usual purchase flow is: I see a book that interests me, I get the sample sent to my phone. When I feel like reading, I read some samples and If I like one I can order from my phone and start reading. With this particular book it would be a safe bet, I've read all his books, even REAMDE twice, which others didn't appear to find as compelling. But I don't like even the concept of pre-orders on general principles, although fiction publishers don't abuse them as badly as other i.e. game publishers (http://www.reddit.com/r/gaming/comments/2s6zgz/stop_preordering_video_games_a_plea_from_one/ http://www.reddit.com/r/gaming/comments/2s6zgz/stop_preorder...) I still prefer not to participate.
- plg 12y agojesus god, what awful typesetting
- grey-area 12y agoThe entire body is letterspaced and bold, that's the main problem. If you're in chrome you can edit styles on the fly, so try adding: letter-spacing: 0; font-weight: 300; line-height: 1.5em;
- ghaff 12y agoCabin, which if I'm reading the CSS properly is what he's using, isn't a bad typeface. (Humanist sans serif related to Gill which I rather like.) But the spacing and weight--combined with the white on black--are really awful.
- pinewurst 12y agoI appreciate his consideration in saving me a future time investment. Plus everyone else now gets moved up a slot on the library reserve list. A win-win.
- ChrisClark 12y agoWow, what a horribly self-righteous way to tell everyone about your personal tastes. I feel enlightened already.
- nissimk 12y agoI liked it, but I am a big Stephenson fan. I skipped Anathem and the baroque cycle books, but Diamond Age is one of my favorite books and I also like Snow Crash and Cryptonomicon a lot. Reamde was pretty good, and this is an interesting setup. Edit: Anathem not Anathema (thanks __david__ and lmm)
- searine 12y ago> I skipped Anathema You my friend, have missed out big time.
- bryanlarsen 12y agoReamde was very mediocre compared to the ones you skipped.
- nissimk 12y agoI enjoy the plot where multiple groups converge on a single location to get their hands on some key object. It's the same structure as two of my favorite movies: The Fifth Element and True Romance. When the groups are stereotypes as in True Romance, I find it even more entertaining. Reamde had all of that: bikers, anti government mountain people who are armed to the teeth and gangsters from multiple foreign countries :-) I'll see if I can check out Anathem at some point, but Baroque is really too much of a commitment for me. I'm a slow reader. Edit: Anathem not Anathema (thanks __david__ and lmm)
- zkhalique 12y agoIt's always so hard to read things on a dark background on a backlit screen. And especially looking at light backgrounds after that. Why is that?
- jff 12y agoI don't know, but the white text started sort of "flickering" between bright and dark after a while; a paragraph might look pretty bright, then it would suddenly seem darker again while the paragraph above looked brighter. It messed with my head and eventually I had to stop.
- nitrogen 12y agoThe gradient in the background might have had something to do with that. Also, low grade LCDs have obnoxiously extreme brightness variations from top to bottom that are most prominent in the mid-to-dark grays.
- jff 12y agoAh, but this is my big fancy expensive Dell screen at work... I think it was a combination of the webpage and my brain flipping out.
- expert 12y agoMan, no kidding. It feels like a very inelegant info dump. While I realize those tend to show up in Stephenson books at some point or another, it's a rough way to start. I liked a lot about Anathem but found Reamde unmemorable. I'd love to see a return to form
- jacquesm 12y agoAt a guess the moon will turn into a ring surrounding the earth in the longer term, curious how it will continue.
- 3am 12y agoIt will turn into a cloud of asteroids surrounding the earth intended to prevent the human race from unleashing whatever hell we create with those autonomous mining robots on the ISS (would be my guess, at least). Feel like the agent/patient distinction is pretty blunt foreshadowing against it being a survival/resilience story against and abstract antagonist like a random natural disaster. edit: http://www.amazon.com/Seveneves-A-Novel-Neal-Stephenson/dp/0062190377 http://www.amazon.com/Seveneves-A-Novel-Neal-Stephenson/dp/0... gives a bit more detail and it is likely it will not become a ring. Probably a lot of highly energetic reentrant debris capable of generating a lot of atmospheric heat. edit: @jaquesm - i'm allowing for creative license, and was making guess explaining what would happened based on my gut feel for the plot direction. you're probably correct on the physics.
- jhallenworld 12y agoI'm going with the Wool Omnibus theory: we find out that someone on earth did it on purpose.
- jacquesm 12y agoThat's at odds with what I understand of the celestial mechanics of the earth-moon system, roughly the same thing happened to Saturn and even though the rings have thickness they are relatively thin compared to their width. What reason would there be for the moon debris to form a cloud, that would require a lot of energy added to the pieces after the initial collision to get them to go into other orbits? (I'm sure Stephenson has researched this but it makes no sense to me at first sight.) The options really are quite limited, re-unification in a 'lump', one or more large chunks escaping earth orbit or a ring, I don't see how a cloud is possible. All but the second would result in quite a bit of debris landing on earth as the debris from the collisions would be scattered in all directions.
- CamperBob2 12y agoThe moon blew up with out warning and for no apparent reason. TIL that "with out" is two words. (I mean, seriously. How do you screw up your very first sentence?)
- joshschreuder 12y agoIt appears to be fixed.
- slashnull 12y ago“Not now, Pa, I know the moon’s pretty, I’m right in the middle of debugging this method . . .”
- msielski 12y agoThis helped make reading this a little easier. Copy and paste to your URL bar. You may have to retype the javascript: as it appears to get stripped for security. javascript:$('.entry').css({ "background":"#fff","color":"#333","padding":"10px","font-family":"Arial, 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, sans-serif","font-size":"14px","font-style":"normal","font-variant":"normal","font-weight":"400","line-height":"20px" })
- jefurii 12y agoYou can also just turn styles off ("View > Page Style > No Style" in Firefox).
- soapdog 12y agoOr even better, if you`re in a recent version of Firefox you can click on the little "open book" icon in the address bar and enter the reader mode which looks pretty nice as can be seen in http://i.imgur.com/oiZGekO.png http://i.imgur.com/oiZGekO.png
- 2close4comfort 12y ago19th May will not get here soon enough. Always good sometime challenging but I never get sick of reading his books!!
- classicsnoot 12y agoThe first time i read Cryptonomicon it was a pleasure the whole way through, from page 01 to page >9000. This may have been because it was almost entirely news to me; i had little to no experience with anything it covered. I finished it in 3-4 days. What a delight. Each reread i learn something new. Conversely, I went into Snow Crash with high expectations only to find the story somewhat silly. Not that there weren't really great moments.
- robodale 12y agomy eyes
- pronoiac 12y agoOh right, this is coming out next month! He's going on tour to support the release: http://www.nealstephenson.com/tour.html http://www.nealstephenson.com/tour.html
- jefurii 12y agoastronomicalbodiesformerlyknownasthemoon.com was registered by someone on 2015-03-12.
- thundt 12y agohttp://www.nealstephenson.com/news/2015/04/13/seveneves-excerpt/ http://www.nealstephenson.com/news/2015/04/13/seveneves-exce...
- tonetheman 12y agoMy eyes... dear god. Everywhere I look I see false images of letters.
- ceequof 12y ago“Most black holes are formed when stars collapse,” Ivy said. “But there’s a theory that some of them were created shortly after the Big Bang. The universe was lumpy. Some of the lumps might have been dense enough to undergo gravitational collapse. They could form black holes that instead of weighing what a star weighs could be a lot smaller.” “How small?” “I don’t think there’s a lower limit.” Yes there is. Black holes lose mass by Hawking radiation: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hawking_radiation http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hawking_radiation A black hole smaller than 0.8% Earth masses loses more mass than it gains from the cosmic microwave background, and will eventually evaporate.
- Tloewald 12y agoThat doesn't create a lower limit, just a life expectancy. And the life expectancy is still very long — "within the lifespan of the universe" http://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Micro_black_hole http://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Micro_black_hole
- ceequof 12y agoYou are mistaken. http://arxiv.org/abs/0908.1803v1 http://arxiv.org/abs/0908.1803v1 (See the table on page 15) The lifespan of a 108,000 tonne black hole is ~350 hours. At that mass, its event horizon is .32 attometres across, and the Hawking radiation it emits is measured in gigaelectronvolts.
- Tloewald 12y ago350h is a lifespan, and you're quoting a speculative paper. I haven't read the story extract, but I assume the plan would be to bleed matter into the micro black hole to maintain it. (Arthur C Clarke posited the same concept 40 odd years ago in his Imperial Earth novels.) I assume your point is that a GeV is a minuscule amount of energy, which isn't going to push 130kT around at any speed.
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- allworknoplay 12y agoI love this on his page about the novel: "The only part that gave me any trouble was calibrating an ending that would leave the reader satisfied that the story had concluded while leaving the impression of an open-ended world." Surprise! Still can't write endings. It's okay Neal, it's what we've come to expect, and we totally love you anyway.
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