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Ernest Davis has an outstanding and definitive rebuttal of these claims: https://cs.nyu.edu/~davise/papers/GPT-Poetry.pdf https://cs.nyu.edu/~davise/papers/GPT-
by aithrowawaycomm 2y ago
Ernest Davis has an outstanding and definitive rebuttal of these claims: https://cs.nyu.edu/~davise/papers/GPT-Poetry.pdf https://cs.nyu.edu/~davise/papers/GPT-Poetry.pdf
The basic problem is that GPT generates easy poetry, and the authors were comparing to difficult human poets like Walt Whitman and Emily Dickinson, and rating using a bunch of people who don't particuarly like poetry. If you actually do like poetry, comparing PlathGPT to Sylvia Plath is so offensive as to be misanthropic: the human Sylvia Plath is objectively better by any possible honest measure. I don't think the authors have any interest in being honest: ignorance is no excuse for something like this.
Given the audience, it would be much more honest if the authors compared with popular poets, like Robert Frost, whose work is sophisticated but approachable.
- n4r9 2y agoHuh, that sounds a little like claiming that AI can draw pictures just as well as humans because they look realistic at a first glance. But not if you check whether the text, repetitive elements, and partially-occluded objects in the background look correct.
- aithrowawaycomm 2y agoThe more basic problem is that their methodology would conclude Harry Potter is better than Ulysses, AC/DC is better than Carla Frey, etc etc. It is completely fine to enjoy "dumb" art - I like Marvel comics and a lot of the Disney-era Star Wars novels have been pretty fun. But using easiness and fun as a metric of quality is simply celebrating ignorance and laziness.
- HPsquared 2y agoIt's another case of the impedance mismatch between numbers / KPIs etc and what might be called "lived experience".
- rendaw 2y agoWhy is Ulysses better than Harry Potter?
- musicale 2y agoApples are better than oranges. "An orange a day keeps the doctor away?" I don't think so. Newton's orange? Nope. Orange may be the surprisingly successful remains of a former telecom monopoly, but Apple is the most valuable company on the planet.
- ipaddr 2y agoWhy is Harry Pottery better than a more unknown book like the Sugar Barons? Both are exciting but one is based on real events/letters.. I think parent is basing it on high art principles which are: older better, uniqueness, what others agree is valuable and content/quality. Why aren't we talking about the first english book published? The Recuyell of the Histories of Troye
- krige 2y agoAre you aware of studies of Ulysses and James Joyce in general? That's a good start for this discussion, assuming it's not just a kneejerk reaction.
- netdevphoenix 2y agoYou are assuming that it is objectively true that "Harry Potter is better than Ulysses, AC/DC is better than Carla Frey". What is your basis for that? And what is your definition of "better"?
- spacechild1 2y agoIf all, they are assuming the opposite.
- netdevphoenix 2y agoMy point stands
- snapcaster 2y agoI get the point you're trying to make, and in some philosophical sense you're right. In reality though, people into a field are able to rank quality extremely well and it doesn't end up being the puzzle you're implying it is
- wruza 2y agoWhy is AC/DC “dumber” than, I assume, a fantastic classic musician? I used to think that these artists are riff-riff, but they all turned out to be masters of their art and, ignoring the pop/rock/etc flavor and type, they may actually surpass the genius of a violin virtuoso. Quite a claim you’re making here, assuming that AC/DC popularity was due to “dumbness” overall and that it’s “fine”. It’s not fine, it’s the same step on the ladder. I find this facet of a deep-shallow distinction completely synthetic and (imo) coming from a limited technical-ish view on music. Vivaldi, AC/DC, Blackpink — it’s all an art of a genius level, just differently flavored.
- n4r9 2y agoI'm a bit confused about this AC/DC vs "Carla Frey" comparison. For starters, I can't find any musicians by the name of Carla Frey. There is however a free jazz pianist named Carla Bley. It feels like OP has maybe selected a niche artist that they're personally fond of. I had a listen and it's the sort of stuff you'd get in hotel lobbies. It's nice, and it probably means a lot to people who are really into jazz, but I suspect that few people will ever hear of this artist. Conversely, Angus Young of AC/DC is extremely musically gifted and I suspect that songs like Thunderstruck will have a large social impact for years to come. There's nothing dumb about their songs. Though I don't put much stock in Spotify listens, it has 1.6 billion vs Bley's most popular "Lawns" having around 2 million. Sure, there are cases where great artists are not well known in their own time - from Mozart to Nick Drake - but recognition generally follows in the subsequent decades. If Carla Bley is who they inteded to refer to, they've had over 50 years to become recognised.
- jaredklewis 2y agoIt sounds different to me. Poetry is for the enjoyment and enlightenment of the reader. Who reads poems? The question is a little vague. Who reads poems on a birthday card? Everyone. In a children's book? Parents and children. But this study focuses on literary poems specifically, using works by literary heavy weights like Chaucer, Shakespeare, Dickinson, Whitman, Byron, Ginsberg, and so on. So the question is who reads literary poems, to which the answer is: academics, literary writers, and a vanishingly small population of reader who enjoy such pursuits. So the test of if ersatz AI poetry is as good as "real" poetry should be if target audience (i.e. academics) finds the poems to be enjoyable or enlightening. But this study does not test that hypothesis. This study tests a different hypothesis: can lay people who are not generally interested in literary poetry distinguish between real and AI literary poetry? The hypothesis and paper feel kind of like a potshot at literary poetry to me, or at least I don't understand why this particular question is interesting or worthy of scientific inquiry.
- godelski 2y ago> Poetry is for the enjoyment and enlightenment of the reader. Is it? If I read a book and it makes my whole body so cold no fire can warm me, I know that is poetry. If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry. These are the only ways I know it. Is there any other way? - Emily Dickinson Clearly Dickinson believes it is far more than what’s at the surface. It is more than the rhyme and rhythm. They add to the effect, but they are not necessary conditions. It’s generally agreed upon that art is defined by making you feel. Lay people are often uninterested in poetry because they didn’t study it. There’s nothing wrong with that. Many are put off by elitists, garbage, and the difficulty to parse. But this is true for any subject matter, we see similarities in programming and in science. You see even many from there point to the surface and dismiss despite the importance being underneath. But it also doesn’t have to be for everyone. It’s not about being smart or dumb either, as most people happily get into the depths of the subjects they enjoy. Be it a child’s obsession with dinosaurs, a teen’s obsession in videogames, or an elite academic. We all have that capacity but there are always hurdles to entry and sometimes the point is to stumble. When it is, removing the hurdles harms the domain, even though it’s almost always done with the best of intentions. Eventually you gotta touch the stove top to learn it’s hot
- shiroiushi 2y agoOr if you check that any pictures of people have the correct number of fingers, toes, arms, legs, or heads.
- ludwik 2y agoTo me, it sounds more like claiming that AI writes better code than Linus Torvalds because a group of random non-programmers preferred reading simple AI-generated Python over Linux kernel C code.
- NeutralCrane 2y agoNot sure that I agree with this metaphor, as the utility of code is both subjective (readability) and objective (performance). There are objective ways in which C code simply can’t be matched by a Python implementation. If they were equivalent in terms of performance, I think use of C would crater. With poetry, the “utility” is entirely the subjective experience of the reader. There is no objective component.
- HPsquared 2y agoI don't agree that it's possible to describe a piece of poetry as "objectively" better or worse.
- aithrowawaycomm 2y agoI would say Davis's definition of "objectively better" here is "nobody who reads these poems carefully could possibly conclude that this AI crap is better than Walt Whitman, the only explanation is Walt Whitman is so difficult that the raters didn't read it carefully." The Nature paper is making a bold and anti-humanist claim right in the headline, laundering bullshit with bad data, without considering how poorly-defined the problem is. This data really is awful because the subjects aren't interested in reading difficult poetry. It is entirely appropriate for Davis, as someone who actually is interested in good poetry, to make a qualitative stand as to what is or isn't good poetry and try to define the problem accordingly.
- gcau 2y ago>This data really is awful because the subjects aren't interested in reading difficult poetry. If the results were the opposite, would the data still be awful?
- Spivak 2y agoThat's my litmus test for whether I'm confirmation biasing myself. Obviously this study is flawed and the results are garbage! But if the study had concluded the opposite then I knew it!
- Hercuros 2y agoThe data would still be awful, and people would pay less attention to the study because it’s not a priori surprising that ChatGPT would write worse poetry than the most celebrated poets in history. If I use bad data to conclude that “Java is faster than C++ in most cases” you can be sure it will receive a lot more attention than if I reached the opposite conclusion based on similarly bad data.
- lm28469 2y agoThe vast majority of people seem to prefer Avengers 17 over any cinematic masterpiece, the latest drake song would be better rated than a Tchaikovsky... We should let them play and worship chat gpt if that's what they want to waste their time on
- gcau 2y agoI don't understand the logic of calling superhero movies lesser/unserious like this, it's very snobby. Movies and music are made to be entertaining, the avengers is more entertaining than your "arthouse cinematic masterpiece that nobody likes but it's just because they aren't smart enough to understand it". It's also lazy and ignorant to ignore the sheer manpower that goes into making a movie like that.
- amanaplanacanal 2y agoNobody likes art that requires them to think.
- westurner 2y agoWell, the art can't judge itself. Maybe critics are art, too. Like Lipton's "Inside the Actor's Studio" (Detroit). That's art. "It's not art it's ari. You want to make an art film? You take it to Sundance, you take it to Telluride, you take it to Cannes."
- MathMonkeyMan 2y agoMovies and music are usually made to be entertaining, but sometimes they're made as an artistic outlet for the creator. I was listening to Schoenberg's "Suite for Piano" the other day. Did he make it to be entertaining? I don't know, interesting maybe. I wouldn't put it on at a party. It's true that snobbery is off-putting, but if you're looking for artistic merit, then some works last longer than others. If you're looking for something to enjoy with your popcorn, then there's that too.
- lm28469 2y ago> your "arthouse cinematic masterpiece that nobody likes You're reading way too much into my comment. Any block buster from the 80/90s absolutely shits on 90% of block busters released today. I'm not talking about obscure 1950s czechoslovak cinema here... > ignore the sheet manpower that goes into making a movie like that. A lot of work doesn't make something good, especially when cgi quality actually gets worse year after year. FYI the entire LOTR trilogy had 30% less budget and 4x the runtime of the last avenger movie... And they actually filmed things outside of a Hollywood studio The only lazy thing here are the scenarists and the directors shitting out the blandest movies ever. But then again if all we care about is raw entertainment then sure, it's perfect, very easy to digest, lots of colors and not too much to think about, the cinematic equivalent of fast food. You can even buy avengers branded toilet paper and bottle water, that really shows how much they care about movies!
- ksymph 2y agoI don't see how the authors are dishonest about it, or that the rebuttal refutes any of the actual claims made. They make it clear in the paper that they're specifically evaluating people who aren't especially interested in poetry, and talk at length about how and why this is different from other approaches. I suppose the clickbait title gives a bad first impression. To summarize the facts: when people were asked to tell if a given poem was written by human or AI, people thought the AI poems were human more often than human poems. People also tended to rate them higher when they thought they were created by AI than when they thought they were human-made. It's speculated in the paper that this is because the AI poems tended to be more accessible and direct than the human poems selected, and the preference for this style from non-experts combined with the perception that AI poetry is poor led to the results.
- aithrowawaycomm 2y agoThe selection of human poets is cooked to give the result they wanted. I will grant the authors may have lied to themselves. But I don't think honest scientists would have ever constructed a study like this. It is comparing human avant garde jazz to AI dance music and concluding that "AI music" is more danceable than "human music", without including human dance music! It's just infuriating.
- ksymph 2y agoThey expressly state the result is likely because the AI poetry was more simple and direct than the poetry selected, which is more accessible for the average person not interested in poetry. They compare and contrast this with other studies where this was not the case. Yes, it's comparing apples and oranges; that's the whole point. It doesn't make the experiment itself flawed.
- enaaem 2y agoIt seems to me that the whole study was intended to manufacture a result to grab headlines. Scientific clickbait. It doesn't matter how transparent they are, because that is mostly there to cover their asses.
- HDThoreaun 2y ago> the human Sylvia Plath is objectively better by any possible honest measure. Except for arguably the most important one, creating something that people enjoy. Just because you dont like it doesnt make it worthless. I guess the actual question is do the raters actually get any enjoyment out of the ai poem or do they just intensely dislike both?
- godelski 2y ago> The basic problem is that GPT generates easy poetry I was going to come in here and say this. I'll even make the claim that GPT and LLMs __cannot write poetry__. Of course, this depends on what we mean by "poetry." Art is so hard to define, we might as well call it ineffable. Maybe Justice Potter said it best, "I know it when I see it." And I think most artists would agree with this, because the point is to evoke emotion. It is why you might take a nice picture and put it up on a wall in your house but no one would ever put it in a museum. But good art should make you stop, take some time to think, figure out what's important to you. The art that is notable is not something you simply hang on a wall and get good feelings from when you glance at it. They are deep. They require processing. This is purposeful. A feature, not a bug. They are filled with cultural rhetoric and commentary. Did you ever ask why you are no Dorothea Lange? Why your photos aren't as meaningful as Alfred Eisenstaedt's? Clearly There's something happening here, but what it is ain't exactly clear. Let me give a very recent example. Here[0] is a letter from The Onion (yes, that Onion, the one who bought InfoWars The Onion) wrote an amicus brief to the Supreme Court. It is full of satire while arguing that satire cannot be outlawed. It is __not__ intended to be read at a glance. In fact, they even specifically say so > (“[T]he very nature of parody . . . is to catch the reader off guard at first glance, after which the ‘victim’ recognizes that the joke is on him to the extent that it caught him unaware.”). That parody only works if one is able to be fooled. You can find the author explaining it more here[1]. But we're coders, not lawyers. So maybe a better analogy is what makes "beautiful code." It sure as fuck is not aesthetically pleasing. Tell me what about this code is aesthetically pleasing and easy to understand? float InvSqrt(float x){ float xhalf = 0.5f * x; int i = *(int*)&x; i = 0x5f3759df - (i >> 1); x = *(float*)&i; x = x*(1.5f - xhalf*x*x); return x; } It requires people writing explanations![2] Yet, I'd call this code BEAUTIFUL. A work of art. I'd call you a liar or a wizard if you truly could understand this code at a glance. I specifically bring this up because there's a lot of sentiment around here that "you don't need to write pretty code, just working code." When in fact, the reality is that the two are one in the same. The code is pretty __because__ it works. The code is a masterpiece because it solves issues you probably didn't even know existed! There's this talk as if there's this bifurcation between "those who __like__ to write code and those who use it to get things done." Or those who think "code should be pretty vs those who think code should just work." I promise you, everyone in the former group is deeply concerned with making things work. And I'll tell you now, you've been sold a lie. Code is not supposed to be a Lovcraftian creature made of spaghetti and duct tape. You should kill it. It doesn't want to live. You are the Frankenstein of the story. To see the beauty in the code, you have to sit and stare at it. Parse it. Contemplate it. Ask yourself why each decision is being made. There is so much depth to this and it's writing is a literal demonstration of how well Carmack understands every part of the computer: the language, how the memory is handled, how the CPU operations function at a low level, etc. I truly feel that we are under attack. I don't know about you, but I do not want to go gentle into that good night. Slow down, you move too fast, you got to make the morning last. It's easy to say not today, I got a lot to do, but then you'll grow up to be just like your dad. [0] https://www.supremecourt.gov/DocketPDF/22/22-293/242292/20221003125252896_35295545_1-22.10.03%20-%20Novak-Parma%20-%20Onion%20Amicus%20Brief.pdf https://www.supremecourt.gov/DocketPDF/22/22-293/242292/2022... [1] https://www.law.berkeley.edu/article/peeling-layers-onion-head-writer-mike-gillis-dishes-on-satire-and-worlds-funniest-amicus-brief/ https://www.law.berkeley.edu/article/peeling-layers-onion-he... [2] https://betterexplained.com/articles/understanding-quakes-fast-inverse-square-root/ https://betterexplained.com/articles/understanding-quakes-fa...
- ugh123 2y agoYou're making a load of generous claims for yourself without giving your thought process: > The basic problem is that GPT generates easy poetry > were comparing to difficult human poets What's your qualitative process for measuring "easy" vs. "difficult" poetry? > rating using a bunch of people who don't particuarly like poetry How do you know these people don't like poetry? Maybe they don't seek it out, but certainly poetry is not just for poetry lovers. Good poetry speaks to anyone. > the human Sylvia Plath is objectively better by any possible honest measure Really? Whats your objective measure?
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- scrubs 2y ago>is so offensive ... Agree. Poetry is the compact written reflection of an expanded or conflicted soul ... it requires lived experience, self awareness, and ability to compress out superfluous details in language. The question of whether the human soul can be tricked by an AI illusionist and to what degree is a non sequiteur. Humans eat the meal. At best, and charitably considered, AI eats the menu. Not the same. In other news I asked AI to convince me it understands American capitalism, and to explain it to me as if I lived in Los Angeles - you know so I could really see/feel it. It did decently well concluding it will, for example, balance the demand for "ample parking" with supply. Now, I leave you to assess whether that's an awesome and intelligent example, or an AI love song that like Marshall Tucker reminds "can't be wrong."