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I wish I had this before I started on my novel: Once upon a time there was ___. Every day, ___. One day ___. Because of that, ___. Because of that, ___. Until
by hliyan 11y ago
I wish I had this before I started on my novel:
Once upon a time there was ___. Every day, ___. One day ___. Because of that, ___. Because of that, ___. Until finally ___.
- TheSisb2 11y agoYou're missing the final step: "And ever since then, ____." Read his other posts.
- searine 11y agoAdding on this. Trey Parker and Matt Stone's rule for story telling : "Every new plot point should be connected to the last with either a "but" or a "therefore"." Eg: Cartman wanted to go to Casa Bonita BUT he was dick to Kyle and wasn't invited. THEREFORE Cartman fakes kindess to win him over, BUT Kyle sees through it. THEREFORE...