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On the other hand, a title of "The Egg" might not have attracted enough views and upvotes for you to have seen it. There's a pique/spoil trade-off, now in socia
by gojomo 13y ago
On the other hand, a title of "The Egg" might not have attracted enough views and upvotes for you to have seen it. There's a pique/spoil trade-off, now in social media more than ever.
(In this case, the first line might have worked just as well, though: "You were on your way home when you died...")
- tvon 13y ago"The other hand" is a far better scenario. Odds are you'll see it at some point if this sort of thing interests you, far better that than to find it this way.
- anigbrowl 13y agoThe Egg (short Sci-fi story) would have been perfectly adequate.
- judk 13y agoSpeculative fiction, or parable, or fable, or theology.
- rkuykendall-com 13y agoI submitted this story to Reddit a few years ago with the title "You were on your way home when you died." Grabs your attention, but gives nothing away since that's just the first line. It's a great first line.