The concept is not well demonstrated due to a lack of demo and vague wording throughout. When the critique focuses on grammar and presentation, that in itself s

The concept is not well demonstrated due to a lack of demo and vague wording throughout. When the critique focuses on grammar and presentation, that in itself should be a strong hint that more is needed for this to be a viable concept. In addition, the grammar is fairly critical to making a good impression - especially when creating a service that claims it will help you impress employers.