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>It's obvious how to change that sentence. Changing the rest is not obvious. Good question. First, I would ask yourself, "would the rest of the writing really
by schiffern 2y ago
>It's obvious how to change that sentence. Changing the rest is not obvious.
Good question. First, I would ask yourself, "would the rest of the writing really need to be changed?"
If they're not making negative value judgements against the original work, then I would say they fall outside of the feedback I offered.
- Dylan16807 2y agoWell my personal view is that it is making a negative value judgement against the original work and that it does not really need to be changed. But your suggestion of a "trivial" way to change it got me curious.