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Original comment is not "noticing". It's complaining to people to stop talking about what matters to them. It's one thing to say "look, they said X" than to sa
by eddd-ddde 2y ago
Original comment is not "noticing". It's complaining to people to stop talking about what matters to them.
It's one thing to say "look, they said X" than to say "please don't talk about X on the internet".
- whythre 2y agoSeems like lip service slacktivism that does nothing but inject a bit of weird misplaced guilt. Railroads were a huge technological innovation. Handwringing about the skeletons in the national closet without really understanding how or why the railroad played a role seems distracting. The quote from the article says, in essence: ‘railroads and the Indian Wars happened at the same time, kinda, so… railroads bad, maybe?’ And op’s point stands. Tech is power; and almost any tech can be used and abused. But tossing this in seems lazy at best.
- giaour 2y agoDid you read the article? The sentence OP objects to is the lead-in to a conductor on a trip telling him about how rail passengers were encouraged to help reduce the native population. It's a bit of context for an anecdote, in an article that is entirely compared of lightly contextualized anecdotes.
- timr 2y agoYou could remove the sentence I quoted, keep the thing from the conductor about bison, and it wouldn't make a difference to the story [1]. It's a "lead in" only in the extremely literal sense that the one sentence comes before the other one. [1] It might even work better, since it lets you draw your own conclusions about the anecdote. Not everything needs to be a lesson.
- BadHumans 2y agoI agree that the story flows better without it but I'm saying it is not irrelevant like you claim. It is bad writing if nothing else.