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Roast My Landing Page
I’m optimising the homepage lemon.io and need the help of the community.
We are targeting startups and the visual brand and tone of voice played a good role in our growth. I see there are a lot of things that make me doubt it.
Our conversion is a bit below of I would expect. I’m building a list of assumptions that will test within the next 3 months.
Looking for feedback on:
• copy
• design
• trust
Thank you.
- surprisetalk 4y agoWow, I love the branding!
- lemoneyeo 4y agoThank you
- alexfromapex 4y agoIt took me way to long to figure out what it was about. Needs better headline copy. Also, took the page like 3-4 seconds to load which isn't terrible but it's not optimized either.
- lemoneyeo 4y agoThank you for feedback. Did you load it from the mobile or desktop?
- alexfromapex 4y agoDesktop
- andygor 4y agoSo why did you decide to change it?
- lemoneyeo 4y agoNot change it. Optimize.
- 1970-01-01 4y agoway too much to scroll through.
- lemoneyeo 4y agoWhat would you cut?
- 1970-01-01 4y agoAll of it. Focus your main page on your best service and stuff the rest behind a hamburger button.