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I like the general idea of where you are going, but you go way too fast towards the end and jump the tracks. I think this post would work much better if you dr
by SkyBelow 7y ago
I like the general idea of where you are going, but you go way too fast towards the end and jump the tracks. I think this post would work much better if you dropped the ministry of love bit and were slower introducing the ministry of truth. I would also suggest avoiding the phrase "ministry of truth" and stick to something a bit more generic, such as "a ministry dedicated to uncovering falsehoods". Still very on point to the extent of having a feeling of lacking subtlety, but without the over the top forced feeling of using the exact phrase.