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It's not really a passive sentence, even though it has all the attributes the Army apparently deems necessary and sufficient to declare it as such in section e.

It's not really a passive sentence, even though it has all the attributes the Army apparently deems necessary and sufficient to declare it as such in section e. But a passive sentence is one where the subject is absent - but in this sentence, the subject is 'you'. 'Entitled to jump pay for the time you spent in training last year' is an adjectival phrase. The sentence makes an active statement about the recipient: You are entitled to jump pay for the time you spent in training last year. is no more passive than You are a fine soldier. A passive version of this sentence would be more like You are being granted jump pay for the time you spent in training last year.

dllthomas 7y ago
The subject of the verb "to entitle" is that which grants entitlement. The recipient is the object. I think we can legitimately read the sentence as passive. Active; "applicable regulations" are doing something: "Applicable regulations entitle you to jump pay for the time you spent in training last year." Passive; "applicable regulations" are still doing something: "You are entitled by applicable regulations to jump pay for the time you spent in training last year." Still passive; vague about what's doing something: "You are entitled to jump pay for the time you spent in training last year." As you point out, "entitled" is often used as an adjective. I think you're right that the sentence can be read that way, and in that case it is indeed active. After consideration, I think the passive read is more correct, but I can't yet put my finger on why.
- SomeOldThrow 7y ago
  https://languagelog.ldc.upenn.edu/nll/?p=3096 https://languagelog.ldc.upenn.edu/nll/?p=3096
  - dllthomas 7y ago
    Was that the wrong link? I was excited that someone had done the digging in language log to find a post that clarifies (I'd bet there's a few), but that one doesn't seem relevant.
    - jameshart 7y ago
      It seems to be relevant in that it describes how the common formation of adjectival phrases in English (from which these new transitive formations discussed in the Language Log are a deviation) is based on adjective + prepositional phrase, and our subject sentence follows that pattern - "entitled" is being used as an adjective, and "to jump pay for the time you spent in training last year" is a prepositional phrase. You are entitled to jump pay for the time you spent in training last year You are familiar with this aircraft Nobody would argue that that second sentence is a 'passive sentence', and it consists - in this analysis - of exactly the same grammatical elements. But this all just comes down to the fact that 'to be' is a weird verb and it screws with a lot of grammatical assumptions; that the way participial adjectives are used blurs the question of what is the 'verb' in a sentence, and even that the verb 'to entitle' is a strange one in that it is often tricky to pin down what would be the subject of an active sentence using entitle as a verb. I think we can all agree that it's basically a terrible choice of a sentence if you want to provide a clear example of how to favor the active voice in writing :)
      - foldr 7y ago
        > "to jump pay for the time you spent in training last year" is a prepositional phrase. It's an infinitival clause ('to' is not a preposition here).
        dllthomas 7y ago
        I've been reading "jump pay" as a compound noun.
        foldr 7y ago
        Oh, I see.
      - foldr 7y ago
        >the verb 'to entitle' is a strange one in that it is often tricky to pin down what would be the subject of an active sentence using entitle as a verb. It isn't difficult at all. E.g. in "This coupon entitles them to cheese", "this coupon" is clearly the subject. You may be thinking about thematic structure more than grammatical relations.
- e12e 7y ago
  Isn't the subject you, the verb "to be" (are) - and the reminder a describing clause? You run quickly. You are a good boy. You are entitled to receive praise. ? Ed: but "you qualify for pay" might be better active voice here? Ed2: I see jameshart made a similar point more eloquently about "adjectival phrase"
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  - dllthomas 7y ago
    "Quickly" modifies the verb, "a good boy" is a noun phrase. "You are smart" is a better analogue, clearly active voice. "You are hit" is another analogue, clearly passive. I still believe that we can read the original sentence in the latter way - with "entitled" a verb used passively. I remain unsure as to whether we can read it the other way - with "entitled" as adjective.
jessaustin 7y ago
"are" in the concluding sentence of thread parent is equivalent to "are being" in your concluding sentence. "granted" is equivalent to "entitled". In a passive-voice sentence like this, the object of the verb is made to seem like the subject, but the object it remains.

dllthomas 7y ago

The subject of the verb "to entitle" is that which grants entitlement. The recipient is the object. I think we can legitimately read the sentence as passive. Active; "applicable regulations" are doing something: "Applicable regulations entitle you to jump pay for the time you spent in training last year." Passive; "applicable regulations" are still doing something: "You are entitled by applicable regulations to jump pay for the time you spent in training last year." Still passive; vague about what's doing something: "You are entitled to jump pay for the time you spent in training last year." As you point out, "entitled" is often used as an adjective. I think you're right that the sentence can be read that way, and in that case it is indeed active. After consideration, I think the passive read is more correct, but I can't yet put my finger on why.

SomeOldThrow 7y ago
https://languagelog.ldc.upenn.edu/nll/?p=3096 https://languagelog.ldc.upenn.edu/nll/?p=3096
- dllthomas 7y ago
  Was that the wrong link? I was excited that someone had done the digging in language log to find a post that clarifies (I'd bet there's a few), but that one doesn't seem relevant.
  - jameshart 7y ago
    It seems to be relevant in that it describes how the common formation of adjectival phrases in English (from which these new transitive formations discussed in the Language Log are a deviation) is based on adjective + prepositional phrase, and our subject sentence follows that pattern - "entitled" is being used as an adjective, and "to jump pay for the time you spent in training last year" is a prepositional phrase. You are entitled to jump pay for the time you spent in training last year You are familiar with this aircraft Nobody would argue that that second sentence is a 'passive sentence', and it consists - in this analysis - of exactly the same grammatical elements. But this all just comes down to the fact that 'to be' is a weird verb and it screws with a lot of grammatical assumptions; that the way participial adjectives are used blurs the question of what is the 'verb' in a sentence, and even that the verb 'to entitle' is a strange one in that it is often tricky to pin down what would be the subject of an active sentence using entitle as a verb. I think we can all agree that it's basically a terrible choice of a sentence if you want to provide a clear example of how to favor the active voice in writing :)
    - foldr 7y ago
      > "to jump pay for the time you spent in training last year" is a prepositional phrase. It's an infinitival clause ('to' is not a preposition here).
      - dllthomas 7y ago
        I've been reading "jump pay" as a compound noun.
        foldr 7y ago
        Oh, I see.
    - foldr 7y ago
      >the verb 'to entitle' is a strange one in that it is often tricky to pin down what would be the subject of an active sentence using entitle as a verb. It isn't difficult at all. E.g. in "This coupon entitles them to cheese", "this coupon" is clearly the subject. You may be thinking about thematic structure more than grammatical relations.
e12e 7y ago
Isn't the subject you, the verb "to be" (are) - and the reminder a describing clause? You run quickly. You are a good boy. You are entitled to receive praise. ? Ed: but "you qualify for pay" might be better active voice here? Ed2: I see jameshart made a similar point more eloquently about "adjectival phrase"
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- dllthomas 7y ago
  "Quickly" modifies the verb, "a good boy" is a noun phrase. "You are smart" is a better analogue, clearly active voice. "You are hit" is another analogue, clearly passive. I still believe that we can read the original sentence in the latter way - with "entitled" a verb used passively. I remain unsure as to whether we can read it the other way - with "entitled" as adjective.

jessaustin 7y ago

"are" in the concluding sentence of thread parent is equivalent to "are being" in your concluding sentence. "granted" is equivalent to "entitled". In a passive-voice sentence like this, the object of the verb is made to seem like the subject, but the object it remains.