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"Custom Plan We have special offers for Serious Businesses Please get in touch" I wouldn't call them "Serious Businesses." For one, it looks odd as a proper no
by nck4222 16y ago
"Custom Plan
We have special offers for Serious Businesses
Please get in touch"
I wouldn't call them "Serious Businesses." For one, it looks odd as a proper noun. Secondly, it makes it sound like you're putting down smaller businesses or single people.
Also, periods would be nice.
- vgurgov 16y agoThanks, i will change it! My eng sucks, sorry.
- manicbovine 16y agoYou could call it the "large enterprise plan". Edit: Unless it's not just for large enterprise, of course. Also, the mouseover text on "Business plan" is "medium plan". Is this intentional?
- vgurgov 16y agothx, will take care of it
- metageek 16y agoYou should probably pay somebody to proofread your site, or you're going to lose customers. Your tech could be rock-solid, but a potential customer can't see that, so they look at what they can see. If they see bad English or bad design, they'll assume that the rest of the business is of similar quality.
- vgurgov 16y agoThanks, great advice. Gonna do this anyways. Just didnt have time yet.
- revorad 16y agoI can do it for you if you like. Email me (in profile) or give me your email address. I'd also like to discuss some collaboration with my startup if you're interested. Please put your email address in your profile. You never know who might want to get in touch!
- vgurgov 16y agothx, just added