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>The First place we visited Altis Lakeline managed by Altman Companies was amazing, its a brand new apartment complex with cool amenities, priced at $1400 which
by wapz 10y ago
>The First place we visited Altis Lakeline managed by Altman Companies was amazing, its a brand new apartment complex with cool amenities, priced at $1400 which is much lower, compare to similar places $1600–$1700, that where I missed first red flag. Plus they had amazing special — 2 months free rent — which under normal circumstances will raise suspicion, I thought it’s a brand new property with construction done a few months ago trying to get to full capacity.
I really had trouble reading through this. I know medium isn't for writers per se but basic proofreading would have helped tremendously.
- ceedan 10y agoYou assume the primary language is English. My assumption was that it isn't their first language. I was still able to read it just fine.
- tedmiston 10y agoI felt the same way over and over again throughout. Whether or not the author's primary language is English, it feels like it was written without proofreading or editing at all.
- pbhjpbhj 10y agoWelcome to the internet?!
- magic_beans 10y agoI got the sense they weren't a native speaker. Otherwise the errors were, frankly, egregious.