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I have a bit of feedback: - My idea of a pastime is, no doubt, literature, music and organizing social events." First, remove 'no doubt', it makes the sentenc
by hluska 11y ago
I have a bit of feedback:
- My idea of a pastime is, no doubt, literature, music and organizing social events."
First, remove 'no doubt', it makes the sentence clunky and to be honest, it made me think that you used Google Translate to build this. That isn't bad per se, but it made me question whether you truly have professional-level fluency in English.
In fact, I would likely rewrite that whole sentence.
- The percentages in your progress bars make me ask (myself) too many questions.
When you prepare a resume, assume that the reader will see 1000 resumes and seek out ways to cull the herd. In this case, I find myself asking things like "how does 70% in .js compare to 75% in HTML5??" Or, "I see that you can set up Joomla. Does that count as 80% knowledge of PHP??" You don't want a reviewer to have to make guesses about what your resume means - we rarely guess in your favour...
You likely want keywords in your resume, but I wonder whether it would be a better use of space if you expanded on your projects a little more.
- The descriptions in your skills section make me wonder if you're telling the truth.
For example, consider, "Logo design, Typography, Graphic creation... (Photoshop/Illustrator/Inkscape/..)" When you say that but only show skills in Photoshop and Illustrator, I wonder if you have ever actually done any typography or logo design, or if you have ever used Inkscape. That makes me question the rest of your resume!
Those little issues aside, you did a good job and should be proud of yourself. Good luck in your search, your project and the rest of your Masters!!
- Raed667 11y agoThanks for taking the time to respond. -Most comments mentioned the "progress bar issue", honestly this is the first time I thought that this would be a problem. According to you, what's the best way to display skills? -I wanted to balance between keywords/length/readable-content (not sure if that worked) but if I didn't mention a number of tools or "skills" it is mainly not to make this section too long. As I'm currently looking for a project mainly related to embedded systems, do you think that I should just comment out all the "unrelated" fields? Thank you again =)