No worries, I'm definitely guilty of quickly editing my own comments to phrase them better :) I still feel like I'm a little lost in the essay, though. It's e

No worries, I'm definitely guilty of quickly editing my own comments to phrase them better :) I still feel like I'm a little lost in the essay, though. It's easy to say that all data requires senior people to sign off before data can be decrypted. But that sounds really hard to implement and even harder to legislate. What specifically are you asking for? What am I supposed to be asking my representative to do?