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In particular, every paragraph save two comprises a single sentence. It does read like someone took a list of bullet points, removed the bullets and called it a
by dghf 11y ago
In particular, every paragraph save two comprises a single sentence. It does read like someone took a list of bullet points, removed the bullets and called it an article.
- moron4hire 11y agoI've noticed, this is a growing style trend in British journalism. At least the sentences here are longer. The few times I've accidentally ended up on the Daily Mail, it's been infuriating trying to read their Sesame Street-level sentences.
- Jdoemk2 11y agoWhile I dislike the Daily Mail I actually like their writing style when I'm just looking for a simple article on a specific event/topic I'm ill-informed about. They condense and prioritise the most important information clearly, better than most journalistic sources. In fact when I had to write copy during my first startup job the founder told me to look at how the DM write to see how to communicate simply.