Needs much more specificity wrt the young white guy requirements; you're not optimising enough. You want young white guys, but that's way too general. You need

Needs much more specificity wrt the young white guy requirements; you're not optimising enough. You want young white guys, but that's way too general. You need them to be unmarried (no kids, either) with no negotiating skills, and into algo, dubstep, typography, and expensive road bikes. Low self-esteem is also crucial.