As others have already pointed out, the author does not seem to command long sentences enough. But it can be a good choice for streams-of-consciousness; Marcel

As others have already pointed out, the author does not seem to command long sentences enough. But it can be a good choice for streams-of-consciousness; Marcel Proust is a good example of it. Here are his five longest sentences: https://nathanbrixius.wordpress.com/2013/10/30/the-five-longest-proust-sentences/ https://nathanbrixius.wordpress.com/2013/10/30/the-five-long... In general, I'd recommend to read some Proust as his style is completely against the current trend of short, direct sentences à la Hemingway, and that can be refreshing! By the way, I started reading Proust because of Nabokov's Lectures on Literature: http://www.amazon.com/Lectures-Literature-Vladimir-Nabokov/dp/0156027755 http://www.amazon.com/Lectures-Literature-Vladimir-Nabokov/d... Which I recommend wholeheartedly.