"With our business model (more on this later) our main <value proposition> is to help businesses deliver to their customers faster. At our <current growth>, <tr

"With our business model (more on this later) our main <value proposition> is to help businesses deliver to their customers faster. At our <current growth>, <traction> means increasing the number of <deliveries> being made using OkHi and our <OMTM> is therefore the number of <deliveries> using an OkHi address per week." Less <jargon> in the sentences might be a good start.