Here's my own rewrite of selected paragraphs: > Using a new security system known as Einstein, the OPM detected a network intrusion in April 2015. The FBI said

Here's my own rewrite of selected paragraphs: > Using a new security system known as Einstein, the OPM detected a network intrusion in April 2015. The FBI said it is investigating the breach. > Ken Ammon, chief strategy officer of Xceedium - a information security firm - warned that the hacked data could be used to impersonate or blackmail federal employees with access to sensitive information. > Congressman Adam Schiff has called for database software to be upgraded in light of the most recent attack. > Americans "expect that federal computer networks are maintained with state of the art defenses", Mr Schiff said. > "The threat from hackers, criminals, terrorists and state actors is one of the greatest challenges we face on a daily basis, and it's clear that a substantial improvement in our databases and defenses is perilously overdue." edit: bhauer, your edits are hilarious.