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I cannot really figure out what it is you offer/sell. Give to what or whom? Why? The centerpiece of your homepage is a screenshot telling me to give some unreco
by jurymatic 11y ago
I cannot really figure out what it is you offer/sell. Give to what or whom? Why? The centerpiece of your homepage is a screenshot telling me to give some unrecognizable web page about 'ad-bombing' a penny. Your pitch has to be intuitively understandable and in some kind of context.
Also, I get that you've jumped on the infinite scroll bandwagon but you have an INSANE amount of white space that you could be using to get the point across. I think you're mistaking cleanliness for conciseness.
Hire a good copywriter and a designer who is actually into good design, stat!
- firefoxhane 11y agoI agree that you could use a bit more direction on what users should be giving money to. Very Cool idea though!
- crobertsbmw 11y agoThanks.
- davidhep 11y agoHey Jury. Thanks for the feedback. We have thought of changing to centerpiece to a video. I threw this together as a starting point a while back but we are looking to get something more professional done. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cG5wsSMvUn4 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cG5wsSMvUn4 Do you feel that would be better than the current product demo? I will also play around with the text and white space. Thanks.