Did you have a lawyer who does this sort of work read this? I am not going to give you advice here since I'm not your lawyer, but you need to have one look at t

Did you have a lawyer who does this sort of work read this? I am not going to give you advice here since I'm not your lawyer, but you need to have one look at this. There are issues in this draft that need to be addressed. Someone might even be willing to do it pro-bono.