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Will see if we can clarify re: your first point. Probably have to live with the caps but will ask about that too. Thanks for the feedback.
by joshmoz 11y ago
Will see if we can clarify re: your first point. Probably have to live with the caps but will ask about that too.
Thanks for the feedback.
- capnrefsmmat 11y agoThe bold caps are nearly unreadable. All caps is advocated against by many sources, like Typography for Lawyers (http://typographyforlawyers.com/all-caps.html http://typographyforlawyers.com/all-caps.html), which specifically calls out bold caps. Even the Mozilla Public License abandoned all-caps for conspicuous text: http://lu.is/blog/2012/08/19/a-quick-note-on-conspicuous-text-also-known-as-all-caps/ http://lu.is/blog/2012/08/19/a-quick-note-on-conspicuous-tex... Bryan Garner, a noted expert on legal writing (and editor of Black's Law Dictionary), agrees: > And the worst conventions in contracts? > Caps for contract text that is required to be “conspicuous.” The 9th Circuit has rightly noted that “lawyers who think their caps-lock keys are instant ‘make conspicuous’ buttons are deluded.” http://www.abajournal.com/magazine/article/4_vignettes_lead_to_a_single_moral_about_writing_better_briefs http://www.abajournal.com/magazine/article/4_vignettes_lead_...