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Congrats on shipping! My first reaction is that you need to hit the value propositions much sooner. People aren't going to click "learn more" if you aren't alre
by mortenjorck 11y ago
Congrats on shipping! My first reaction is that you need to hit the value propositions much sooner. People aren't going to click "learn more" if you aren't already giving them a reason to, and while the teletype-effect headlines are nice, they aren't sufficiently making your point. You're jumping into an extremely crowded market, which makes it all the more important that you differentiate as much as possible up front.
Typographically, I think you need to reconsider a few things as well. That "Poiret One" typeface isn't exactly a stunner, and definitely isn't a great pairing for Lato (one of the classic rules of typography is never to mix multiple sans-serif or serif types on the same page). Lato is a beautiful type family; try just restricting yourself to a few of its many weights.
Good luck!
- ne01 11y agoThank you! You are right about the fonts! We will reconsider! Also we decided to create a new home page with our editor! So basically people can try it on our home page sunsed.com