That sounds nice, but you need to make a stronger case about it in the site if you want to get people interested. Think of what features would make people excit

That sounds nice, but you need to make a stronger case about it in the site if you want to get people interested. Think of what features would make people excited about your platform and talk about those, don't just say "My platform is about this" but "My platform is about this and you will like it because this this and that." and go into great length on the second part of that sentence.