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But if you're going to tell, be concise and coherent.
by jackmaney 11y ago
But if you're going to tell, be concise and coherent.
- nocman 11y agoYes, 1000 times yes! I know the author has a lot to say, but even after patiently wading through the first few paragraphs I was not prepared to invest any more time in figuring out what was so great about this project. The article title was enough to get my attention, but I could not hang in there long enough to get excited about (or even remain mildly interested in) the project. Edit: OK, it was probably more like 50-60% of the first page that I read through, not just the first few paragraphs.