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Work on your word choice. This sounds pretty blah: "We're a college based community networking together for a common goal." Also you might want to reread the
by DTrejo 17y ago
Work on your word choice.
This sounds pretty blah:
"We're a college based community networking together for a common goal."
Also you might want to reread the rest of the text on your about page and elsewhere; try to make it more concise and clear. Also make the column of text less wide (and thus more readable).
Also, don't dilute your purpose too soon; focus on one major thing, books for example. Your about page suggested you are going in multiple directions at once. Do one thing and do it well.
- eam 17y agoYou're completely right, I'm jut not the best writer. I am hoping to rewrite that section soon as a lot has change since the launch of the site. Do one thing and do it well. I agree, I had all these ideas (and continue to have) and thought it would be great to have them on the site. However, after reading an article, I believe it was from 37signals, I realized that I was doing too much and that I should keep it simple and focus on one thing for now. Since then I have stop rolling out any other features, other than the ones that are currently available.