It's great that you encourage your team to communicate with the outside world, but that communication would be more effective in this case if it had been edited

It's great that you encourage your team to communicate with the outside world, but that communication would be more effective in this case if it had been edited (and I mean edited - thanks for keeping the marketing department out of it). It looks like all your blogs combined have only a few posts per month, so this shouldn't be a particularly onerous task. Keep up the good work.