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You should remove the word "with" from those titles - the bullet points don't flow properly when appended to the titles
by Bahamut 12y ago
You should remove the word "with" from those titles - the bullet points don't flow properly when appended to the titles
- CPLX 12y agoListen to this person. This is the one glaring thing I noticed, it makes your wording sound stereotypically Eastern European, and is jarring in comparison to a document that otherwise flows quite well.