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Interesting, but well cut from the story. Clumsy, preachy, doesn't add. That's what editing is for. If you skip the editing stage, you end up with Ayn Rand.
by noonespecial 12y ago
Interesting, but well cut from the story. Clumsy, preachy, doesn't add. That's what editing is for. If you skip the editing stage, you end up with Ayn Rand.
- ckozlowski 12y agoInteresting. "Sounds too "Ayn Rand"" was exactly what I thought when reading that passage.