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The author in the original piece starts off pointing out the new era of age discrimination, then starts to add 'women' through her statement and at no point sta
by ckdarby 12y ago
The author in the original piece starts off pointing out the new era of age discrimination, then starts to add 'women' through her statement and at no point states the issue is age discrimination only for women in a specific industry.
The original piece also has broad statements such as, "Every woman".
It is nearly impossible to write a response post with a perfect comparison when someone structures their post without a clear message.
- dcole2929 12y agoAgreed with your last point. However her language very clearly indicates she is speaking about an issue woman face. She almost exclusively uses female pronouns and variations of woman and female. She doesn't speak to industry at all, I just noticed that all of her examples are non tech related while as the author of the response piece specifically uses his own personal example as a startup founder. Which to me makes it seem like we are not dealing with like things. Male Vs Female. Tech vs Corporate America