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The headline "All your favorites in lists" doesn't make any sense to me. I read a little of the blog post and then clicked through to your homepage to see what
by latortuga 17y ago
The headline "All your favorites in lists" doesn't make any sense to me. I read a little of the blog post and then clicked through to your homepage to see what your site was about and I didn't digest it until I had gone through all your bullets and thought about it for a bit. You're making it too hard to understand something simple: "Organize your bookmarks" Use a verb in your headline - why do I want to stay on your site? What is it I can do? You can organize your bookmarks/favorites/whatever word you have for it[1]. Once I know what your site is offering me now I want to stick around and see what your novel approach is - I'm going to leave if I can't figure it out right away. The current headline doesn't hook me and in fact just confused me.
I almost didn't post this because your blog requires sign up to comment. Eliminate barriers!
After typing this whole comment I saw your subheading under your logo - take it out of there and make it your headline! That's what you do!
[1] - As a suggestion maybe show the word favorites for IE users and bookmarks for FF/Chrome users.
- phil_KartMe 17y agothanks for explaining why starting the title with "all" is awkward!