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Wow. What a transformation. I understand the product very well now. The video is a fantastic addition (some kinks need to be worked out, but others have address
by mydpy 12y ago
Wow. What a transformation. I understand the product very well now. The video is a fantastic addition (some kinks need to be worked out, but others have addressed those).
My suggestions:
1. Use consistent bolding and hightlight features (and terms) or actions of your product.
For example, USE <b>#HASHTAGS</b> TO ORGANIZE YOUR
<b>CHATS/LISTS</b>
OR
USE #HASHTAGS TO <b>ORGANIZE</b> YOUR
CHATS/LISTS
2. Use direct rhetoric
For example, USE #HASHTAGS TO ORGANIZE YOUR
CHATS/LISTS
vs.
ORGANIZE YOUR CHATS/LISTS WITH #HASHTAGS
3. Reference quotes from your users. I.e., "quote" - John, Scrum Master for MyApp.com.
4. Shorten the hover-over text for BOOST PRODUCTIVITY,
CONSOLIDATE APP DATA, etc. Make it short and sweet.
Biggest feedback: My original comment was I couldn't see the vision of your product. Now, it is very clear. Kudos.