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On first glance, the marketing site is clean, tidy, and professional. Nice work there! I'll try out the app today. In the meantime a couple of things I looked f
by there4 12y ago
On first glance, the marketing site is clean, tidy, and professional. Nice work there! I'll try out the app today. In the meantime a couple of things I looked for: A screenshot or demo and a help site for support.
The red introductory price text feels a little out of place. It's left justified when the rest feels centered, and I feel like it could be a better callout with improved formatting. It may be a British spelling, but I saw misspelled 'occassional' in the Beta section.
Best wishes with the project it looks promising!
- icefox 12y agoReading the main page I am not sure what it is. Is it a chat application? What would be the elevator pitch? The story you would tell someone about how it is inevitable that all chat clients would do X and how openloopz does it today (todo lists?) What is the problem it solves? Or how does it help me make money? Maybe that is in the FAQ, but from a marketing perspective I stopped reading after the Why section (also the big black bar under made it look like the end of the page).