Too superficial of an analysis to be taken seriously. There is a reason children are taught how to write an article with a proper introduction (introduce the pr

Too superficial of an analysis to be taken seriously. There is a reason children are taught how to write an article with a proper introduction (introduce the problem and provide a map of the article body), body (explain the problem, provide proof and/or proof of concept plus examples, and propose solution if possible), and conclusion (summarize arguments) sections.