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Some css is out of place, but it's generally all there. Is it obvious what we do? Can you find our tiered plans? General critiques are welcome.
by redisfaster 12y ago
Some css is out of place, but it's generally all there.
Is it obvious what we do?
Can you find our tiered plans?
General critiques are welcome.
- smt88 12y agoFirst of all, a lot of CSS is out of place. It's not at all obvious what you do. You've used a lot of your biggest text to say that you're with us every step of the way, but what does that mean? It's really generic. Also, who are your targeting? What's the pain point that you're solving? What existing service are your replacing in my life? Also there are too many walls of text, and the fonts are too small. Edit: A huge amount of the page is taken up by a person's face. That's not conveying any sort of message, so it should be something blurrier or lower contrast or both. See http://teamtreehouse.com http://teamtreehouse.com for an example of some of the things I've suggested.
- redisfaster 12y agoThanks for your feed back. I agree, the fold doesn't scream what we do, or who we do it for. Basically our target market are businesses looking to take credit card payments through their website.