Your company (or competition) never tried this before. -> Your company (or competition) has never tried this before. We are the first in market. -> We are the

Your company (or competition) never tried this before. -> Your company (or competition) has never tried this before. We are the first in market. -> We are the first to market. But people spend less time on e-mail and more on Facebook each day. -> But people spend less time on e-mail and more on Facebook every day. Notifications are spam free -> Notifications are spam-free Facebook notifications don't have spam, as Facebook take good care with user experience on its platform. -> Facebook notifications are not considered spam, as Facebook takes good care of the user experience on its platform. only the customers that want will receive your offers -> only the customers that want your offers will receive them Users spend more time on Facebook than on e-mail and let less notifications unread than emails. -> Users spend more time on Facebook than on e-mail and leave less notifications unread than e-mails. CompanyNote lets you customize all parts of your message: the notification text; the image of your offer content and the link where the offer will redirect. -> CompanyNote lets you customize all parts of your message: the notification text, the image of your offer content, and the link where the offer will redirect. This is the app your customers will signup, authorizing you to send notifications to them. -> This is the app your customers will use to sign up, authorizing you to send notifications to them. In order to access the console your company must provide a valid Facebook account. -> In order to access the console, your company must provide a valid Facebook account. We will send a weekly report with the analytics of you app and notifications. -> We will send a weekly report with the analytics of your app and notifications. This report will inform: -> This report will inform you about: Contact to more product and price details -> Contact us to get more product and price details If you are still a small business with limited budget, ask for details of our less customized low-price option -> If you are still a small business with a limited budget, ask about our less customized, low-price option CompanyNote is the product of the Brazil based company -> CompanyNote is the product of the Brazil-based company We enable companies and business to communicate with their clients through Facebook native notifications feature. -> We enable companies and businesses to communicate with their clients through Facebook's native notifications feature. ----- Those are the spelling and grammatical errors I could find on your homepage. FYI, I am a native English speaker who always got straight A's in English class. It only took me 5 minutes because you only asked me to review your copy, not your layout/design. You're welcome! :D