I spent five minutes looking at the page. That is all I can spare for free. I have written books and hundreds of blog posts. Unfortunately, it is going to take

I spent five minutes looking at the page. That is all I can spare for free. I have written books and hundreds of blog posts. Unfortunately, it is going to take a lot more than five minutes to thoroughly evaluate and rework the page. Have you considered using http://www.fiverr.com/ http://www.fiverr.com/? Right away, I noticed some layout issues. I assume you already know about those. Overall, I like the layout and use of color. Here is a rewrite of the main tagline: "Send offers to your customers through Facebook. Quick and easy. Much better than sending emails."