Seems like a lot of work went into this so props for that. It is a bit unclear though. I think you need to simplify your message or make it more concrete someh

Seems like a lot of work went into this so props for that. It is a bit unclear though. I think you need to simplify your message or make it more concrete somehow. Also, U2's great but it's a little distracting on the video.. That's my 2 cents..