It's a well-written piece, but seriously: "If you're reading this, you've probably already dismissed the plan. You, the individualist, is determined to make you

It's a well-written piece, but seriously: "If you're reading this, you've probably already dismissed the plan. You, the individualist, is determined to make your own way in this world." No need to pander to tha audience so blatantly to make your point.