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One nit: you are missing a question mark following the first bullet under "Why Qwanz?", so "Feel powerless to influence matters that are of interest to you" rea
by spokey 17y ago
One nit: you are missing a question mark following the first bullet under "Why Qwanz?", so "Feel powerless to influence matters that are of interest to you" reads like a benefit statement instead of a question. (I.e.: "It can make me feel powerless? Sign me up.") I assume you meant "Do you feel powerless...?".
Also, maybe it's just me, but that whole image is very fuzzy looking, while the rest of the text on the page is nice and crisp. Maybe it should be PNG instead of JPG?