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> she said something that has been loitering in my mind ever since, wanting my attention but not quite sure why or what it is doing there This is gramatically
by javert 12y ago
> she said something that has been loitering in my mind ever since, wanting my attention but not quite sure why or what it is doing there
This is gramatically fine, makes sense, and didn't give me a second thought when I read the article.
- jrochkind1 12y agoSo, there are ideas loitering in his mind that want his attention but aren't sure why? His ideas... have ideas of their own? Wait, or what is it that wants his attention but isn't sure why? Huh? I think it was an attempt at a metaphor that completely broke down, but I'm not certain.