I found there to be a lot of Jargon. Keep a sales pitch simple. A good rule of thumb is not to say what your business does / what the script is, but what it can

I found there to be a lot of Jargon. Keep a sales pitch simple. A good rule of thumb is not to say what your business does / what the script is, but what it can likely do for me. As the script is complex simply ask users to identify themselves as personal, small business or corporate before entering the website? I THINK I know what the script does but I'm not 100% sure, jargon heavy. A good resource for sales pitches is http://www.ai.uga.edu/mc/WriteThinkLearn.pdf http://www.ai.uga.edu/mc/WriteThinkLearn.pdf (about the first half of the presentation). Feel free to contact me on alexanderdblom [AT} GMAIL