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Overall, great design but very mixed messaging. You seem to cater to a very non-technical crowd, but then confuse them by throwing in low level hosting conside
by jtfairbank 12y ago
Overall, great design but very mixed messaging. You seem to cater to a very non-technical crowd, but then confuse them by throwing in low level hosting considerations (content delivery network, sql injection, etc). Simplify it, focus on what your users know and care about (getting that weekly blog post up without a hitch), and remove the rest.
Specifics:
1. Big call to action buttons over image: change the button background instead of underline.
2. Second heading can be more concise: "PixelGaurd manages your website.<br>You manage your business."
3. Copy under the second heading is too long.
4. Remove the first sentence of Anne's quote, or change it to something like "I got up and running in the first day." Saying she didn't know anything about Wordpress is a huge red flag for me.
5. Mark's quote is great. Maybe emphasize the "we take care of it for you" mentality by having a few example workflows of issues you've solved. This will provide me much more insight into what you can do, and will help me start seeing how I can use Pixelguard in my own business.
6. Include company / position (CEO, marketing, etc) for quotes.
7. Don't like the strikethrough in the plan. Position it as "Advanced gives you more" not "Basic gives you less".