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Is any metric respected (or attempted to)? From what I can quickly see the verses don't seem to be hendecasyllables, but I don't really know how to count that i
by ecesena 12y ago
Is any metric respected (or attempted to)? From what I can quickly see the verses don't seem to be hendecasyllables, but I don't really know how to count that in English :) Anyway, not a complain, it looks like a great effort!
- riffraff 12y agodoesn't seem so, and AFAICT rhyming isn't respected either, but I think trying to fit metric, rhyme, and meaning would be nearly impossible.
- ecesena 12y agoRhyme is not respected, but I guess that's really impossibile. Metric should be "easier" than rhyme, but I totally agree - meaning first.