I liked the piece, but "formidable" feels like the wrong word to me. This piece is about becoming more "impressive to seed stage investors in silicon valley", n

I liked the piece, but "formidable" feels like the wrong word to me. This piece is about becoming more "impressive to seed stage investors in silicon valley", not becoming more "capable and relentless, plowing through everything in your way", which is closer to what I think PG was talking about and what I aspire to. This piece does nothing to help you pass the "animal" test, in other words, which is what the title makes it sound like.