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Thanks for the feedback. I was going for the "narrative" style design for this, I intentionally didn't put all the information "above the fold" like the origin

• aembleton 12y ago
  I prefer that original website. It makes it much clearer what's going on.
  • woven 12y ago
    I prefer Miles' "narrative" style. :)
• escape_goat 12y ago
  In my not-a-good-designer opinion, Trey's page makes a mistake with the high-contrast, heavily shadowed photo and the darkness of the background. UX people should step in to correct me if needed: to me it feels that a human face trumps about everything else on a webpage; the attention shoots to it and our sensibilities adjust to the lighting on the face. That leaves me sitting in a small dark box looking out of a round hole, and the lighting/contrast information from the coffee video gets rejected as incoherent. It was actually quite interesting to have the two of them to compare. I hope you have taken him up on his offer of coffee! It would be the gentlemanly thing to do.