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Your page is way too tall for the amount of information you put. And the most important stuff is at the bottom.
by imaginenore 12y ago
Your page is way too tall for the amount of information you put. And the most important stuff is at the bottom.
- milesokeefe 12y agoThanks for the feedback. I was going for the "narrative" style design for this, I intentionally didn't put all the information "above the fold" like the original site did: http://coffee.tgriff3.com http://coffee.tgriff3.com
- aembleton 12y agoI prefer that original website. It makes it much clearer what's going on.
- woven 12y agoI prefer Miles' "narrative" style. :)
- escape_goat 12y agoIn my not-a-good-designer opinion, Trey's page makes a mistake with the high-contrast, heavily shadowed photo and the darkness of the background. UX people should step in to correct me if needed: to me it feels that a human face trumps about everything else on a webpage; the attention shoots to it and our sensibilities adjust to the lighting on the face. That leaves me sitting in a small dark box looking out of a round hole, and the lighting/contrast information from the coffee video gets rejected as incoherent. It was actually quite interesting to have the two of them to compare. I hope you have taken him up on his offer of coffee! It would be the gentlemanly thing to do.