(Not stcredzero but someone else who said much the same as him/her at about the same time:) That might be an improvement, but if you're going to change the titl

(Not stcredzero but someone else who said much the same as him/her at about the same time:) That might be an improvement, but if you're going to change the title at all perhaps something like "Very long distance telephotography" might be better.