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I was thinking exactly this. Also the Brand Identity section feels a bit fragmented, and I felt "brand identity" is mentioned far too many times. Feels a bit l
by daledavies 12y ago
I was thinking exactly this.
Also the Brand Identity section feels a bit fragmented, and I felt "brand identity" is mentioned far too many times. Feels a bit like it was written for search engines.
There is also a space missing after one of the full stops...
> Your brand is your business identity.Through unique brand
Overall I feel maybe the tone of the website could be a bit more personal. It starts off feeling personal but then the "Who we are" section seems to mix perspectives, beginning in the third person.
I'm no copywriter though, nor am I an expert in English although I am a native speaker. My own website probably isn't perfect either!