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* There is no information of who you are: legal entity or freelancing individuals? What are your names, registration numbers, * The background image is too dar

by me_bx 12y ago

* There is no information of who you are: legal entity or freelancing individuals? What are your names, registration numbers, * The background image is too dark, couldn't see what it is without having to adjust the angle of my laptop screen * The "carousel" is a bad practice in general, and in your site many visitors won't even notice there is one, as it doesn't look like one. * SEO: There's no meta description, openGraph, twitter cards tags (like in many other websites. We're almost in 2015, what are people thinking about? * Copywriting: find a native English-speaker to fix things. * the License page has not enough content * good thing: the highly noticeable call to action "Start a project with us"

ue_ 12y ago
What's wrong with the English on the page? I have a hard time spotting mistakes.
- DanBC 12y ago
  The language is a bit clunky. > Qawba is a group of developers, IT professionals, and graphic designers that works for the creation of websites, templates, the logo, posters and banners as well as the maintenance and updating of websites. The "that works for" here could probably be changed to soemthing better. > We are composed of highly qualified with extensive profiles acquired from national and international companies. Has a missing word, and the "extensive profiles" feels a bit odd.
  - daledavies 12y ago
    I was thinking exactly this. Also the Brand Identity section feels a bit fragmented, and I felt "brand identity" is mentioned far too many times. Feels a bit like it was written for search engines. There is also a space missing after one of the full stops... > Your brand is your business identity.Through unique brand Overall I feel maybe the tone of the website could be a bit more personal. It starts off feeling personal but then the "Who we are" section seems to mix perspectives, beginning in the third person. I'm no copywriter though, nor am I an expert in English although I am a native speaker. My own website probably isn't perfect either!

by me_bx 12y ago

ue_ 12y ago

What's wrong with the English on the page? I have a hard time spotting mistakes.

DanBC 12y ago
The language is a bit clunky. > Qawba is a group of developers, IT professionals, and graphic designers that works for the creation of websites, templates, the logo, posters and banners as well as the maintenance and updating of websites. The "that works for" here could probably be changed to soemthing better. > We are composed of highly qualified with extensive profiles acquired from national and international companies. Has a missing word, and the "extensive profiles" feels a bit odd.
- daledavies 12y ago
  I was thinking exactly this. Also the Brand Identity section feels a bit fragmented, and I felt "brand identity" is mentioned far too many times. Feels a bit like it was written for search engines. There is also a space missing after one of the full stops... > Your brand is your business identity.Through unique brand Overall I feel maybe the tone of the website could be a bit more personal. It starts off feeling personal but then the "Who we are" section seems to mix perspectives, beginning in the third person. I'm no copywriter though, nor am I an expert in English although I am a native speaker. My own website probably isn't perfect either!